Jumat, 04 November 2011

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DEAR NABILA
How are you? I hope you're well too. In my letter I want to tell you about my story.
Last week my family and I went  to the beach Papuma.
We went there  in the morning, we took the car driven by my father. Got there we were playing around the water, we enjoyed the beautiful ocean views.
After the water content to play, we enjoyed a typical meal of grilled fish coastal areas. After
spend time there we went to go home. We arrived home in the evening.
Thus my travel experience, hopefully you
inspired with my story. Do not forget to reply to my letter.
GOOD BYE.

YOUR FRIEND
 
NOVITA

1 komentar:

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Devi, your letter is good enough.but "we enjoy a typical meal of grilled fish coastal areas"
enjoy -> enjoyed.
You get 90

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